Pipi Bluestocking (pipibluestockin) wrote in aussiewriters,
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Is it just me?

The following gem was written yesterday by one of my bosses: -

"We have read the material provided and believe that there are a number of complex unresolved issues. The issues, as you know, are difficult to differentiate, due to the difference in complexity between operating a cutter and operating an aircraft. This is not a straightforward issue it is complex both by way of costs and operational considerations, including safety. We believe we have the collective knowledge to work through these issues with you."

Does anybody else find this paragraph strange to read?

The context was a proposal to a client and this paragraph was apparently supposed to constitute the most telling and persuasive argument for hiring us.
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